Hello Sun….

My hello

to the rising sun;

morning laughs..

 ^^^^

Morning laughs;

I catch the first ray

on my face

 ^^^^^

On my face

people see colours

of happiness…

^^^^^

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6 responses »

  1. Harshad says:

    I like the feeling here…. morning laughs!

  2. Hello Ramesh. Good to have you here with your little verses.

  3. vimala madon says:

    Enjoyed the poem Ramesh and the way you moved to the next verse from the first.

  4. gc1963 says:

    Lucky are those who are in Pune. Shernaz don’t you hold these workshops in other parts of the country? Petition of a learner.

  5. Shernaz says:

    Dear Ramesh, I enjoyed these verses, but from the little I know about Haiku, I am not sure if these would strictly qualify as such. Anyway, we can leave that to the experts. As you are in Pune, would you be interested in attending a proposed Haiku meet towards the end of November? If yes, I can send you the details by e-mail.

  6. Ramesh Sood says:

    Thanks for the honour..hopefully will contribute on more occasions..

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